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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Over the past decades, the issue of crime has been attracting attention and provoking debate. Although it is widely suggested that more preventive (preventative) measures should be conducted against criminals, the issue as to whether this method could deter offenders effectively or not remains controversial. In the following essay, both sides of this phenomenon will be discussed as well as my own point of view on this matter.

On the one hand, some people are right to think that more actions should be carried out for crime prevention. Firstly, the citizens are able to install security systems such as high-security locks and CCTV cameras to protect themselves. Therefore, they will not only guard their facilities’ protection from lawbreakers but also contribute to the general security strategy of the community. From an administrative perspective moreover, the federal government should increase the number and frequency of police patrols, especially during the late hours in order to stop various felonies such as murders, rapes, assaults and even some petty crimes like breaking in and burglaries and pick pocketers. Additionally, the central government could also provide citizens with economic means to become financially independent to avoid going out late to earn money, along with intensifying the severity of punishments for criminals. As a result, the more severe the sentences for offenders will cause the crime rate to lower.

On the other hand, some opponents justified that there was just little success to be achieved in preventing criminal projects. First and foremost, it is important to recognize that criminal tendency is inherent in some individuals. Therefore they can be more dangerous when joying criminal networks, in which the habit of serious crime has become too strong for them to fear the law because lawbreaking was in their bloodline. Furthermore, a severe problem is that the justice system is corrupted and also politicians are bribed by criminals so the government does not resist evil in society. Thus, more and more serious offenders have been appearing in the world. Consequently, the public nowadays does not have entire faith in law enforcement. For example, the large number of mafia members in Italy used to bribe the police successfully and established dangerous criminal system not only in this nation, but also in many countries, which leads the world to a serious fear of abuse, drug movement and crime.

In conclusion, under no circumstances should people underestimate the hazardous level of criminality and take (form) a subjective attitude toward it, because it can lead innocent inhabitants to criminal situations and even lethal life, while the government could not resist the crime due to their corruption. In my opinion, both citizens and the authorities should take proactive action on crime prevention projects to contribute to a safer society.

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