r/IndieGaming • u/xNicktendox • 8h ago

I spent over 30 hours piecing together our trailer. What do you think?

Square force is a chaotic multiplayer FPS that pits you and up to 11 friends against relentless hordes of unforgettable enemies.
Elemental weapons, hundreds of skills and abilities, endless chaos, and an absolute random mess of fun. check out the free demo on Steam.

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u/HBaileyJr 8h ago

Wishlisted! I’ll be checking out the demo when I have the opportunity. I really appreciate how much info you have on your steam page!

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u/Snoo_79687 8h ago

Great job on the promo man. You can tell there was effort and time put into it!

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u/Odd-Surprise-1792 6h ago

trailer looks solid, but I'd cut the slow fade in and the intro card at the start. you get about 3 seconds before a scrolling steam user clicks away, so opening straight on gameplay at 0:00 and saving the logo for the end usually holds way more people. the back half is genuinely strong.

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u/fearthelettuce 4h ago

I cannot stand the super fast jump cuts. What are you trying to accomplish with those?

And the into takes a while to get to gameplay, maybe rearrange some of that to the middle

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u/A-mih 3h ago

I think the trailer does a good job conveying the chaos and energy of the game, but a stronger opening could grab attention much faster. I'd keep the fast cuts for the most exciting moments and let a few key gameplay shots breathe a little.

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u/SunOnYourFace 1h ago

Agree with other comments here - the first 30 seconds are blocking the cooler more interesting gameplay sections.

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u/East-Specialist-4847 18m ago

Speed up that intro you're gonna lose so many people to those first few dragged out seconds before the gameplay showcase

Game looks sick

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u/malakito_dev 11m ago

Such a Trailer!!! You have my whislist! I'll check out the demo too!